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I made a comment about the story "the fairy princes" on Wattpad:

thanks :)

I made a comment about the story "Battle For Morbeck Mountains - Book One - Faybuy Bush - Chapter One" on Wattpad:

sorry for everyone who read this and wondered where the rest of the chapter went, didn’t actually realise that it was missing until now ¬_¬
happy reading!

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I made a comment about the story "the fairy princes" on Wattpad:

you have a good storyline going but the punctuation, spelling and paragraphs, or lack of them I should say, is affecting the way that the story flows.
when a character speaks, put what they say into speech marks otherwise it’s hard to tell who said what.
also, use paragraphs. a paragraph is classed at 5 lines or more so don’t worry about making it sound too long.
finally, make your story flow better. at the moment it’s very ”he did this” then ”i did that” then ‘he did this” etc. try and make the sentences flow better and the story will come together nicely.

I like the storyline and I think if you fixed up the punctuation, grammer and rhythm of it, it would sound much better and be a more enjoyable read for other people

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